
My Unforgettable Moment
Last year, I followed the Introduction to Campus Orientation (Ospek) when I pass the selection after the receipt of new students in Airlangga University. At the time of entering the campus, I feel very different when compared to the first time High School.
Ospek as a kind of ritual that must be passed by each new student. Without it, as it were, will not be legitimate students. Therefore, older students often force new students to follow this procession. Ospek is one way which must be new students.Ospek as a means to identify and understand the campus. Therefore, Ospek is still urgent, and find the point on the relevance of each new student.
At first I joined this activity, I felt afraid and confused because so many new students in there. I really met with new condition. Because I need to get socialized and I need to get attentive on everything around me. Suddenly my shoe was broken. So, I felt really very confused and panic. Lastly, I leave secretly from that orientation. Then, I went to Pucang’s shop for bought new shoes. After I bought that, I back to UNAIR and followed that orientation again. And nobody knew with my problem. After that, I try to relax and I believe that I can follow this activity until finish. After I have that idea, at last I can enjoy it.
And when I have joined this activity, so many things had changed me. Yeah, about being mature and all that. About friends, sharing, being together, everything that I've never thought before. And from activities that also, I can get a lot of new friends.There's one thing that my major has, and I think not the entire major has it, the togetherness. It's not only being together which is important, but the essential of having a new family around me, for today and the next 3 years to my study. We're not just friends, we're just like family. We're going to do everything together in our first year, and it's important not being selfish. Finally, I can know that the goal of Ospek is that students know more about the direction that I choose, the more lecturers, the senior, on the set, and others. And many of the things that are useful will get with the Ospek. So, it’s my unforgettable moment.





13 komentar:
Hello... My good friend.
After I read Your Unforgettable Moment, I feel sad hear it.
Your paragraphs are good. You write The moment chronologically and very well.
I think that all my comments and See U again in other occasion. Bye.........
wildania>
your paragraf are good and very well
but,"confused and panic"???..
you not make a good paragraph in your writing,..
your paragraph still not order,.
elok 120810486G
i think your paragraph is good enough ..
with read your unforgettable moment , i can understand that ospek is very important by student ..
first of all,
thank you for your comment in my blog .
i think your paragraph is good .
you tell about your moment with clearly sequence .
i found some mistakes in your sentences ..
keep in good writing :)
(Ranti P.N 120810190G )
Thanks for comment my blog,
Your paragraph is very good,but i find mistakes in your paragraph.
Please check your grammar too.
Pratiwi Ramandita 120810487G
Hello
Im Sory me scarer coment in your BLog
because i am opportunity Confused make coment in blog.
i think Your Writing is very draw,,,,,, and tighten
...and please check your gramer...ukai,,,,,,,
Thanks...RUDINAL 120810491G
Hy ais....
I think your paragraph is good....
But i still find some mistakes in your paragraph...
So,please check again your paragraph...
Like as your grammar...
That's all
By:Ria Anggraini.S
120810492G
Yulia Primita Sari
(120810494G)
Hello aisyah
Before I say, thank you for your comment in my blog........
- I think, your paragraph is good enough and you can tell your experience clearly.
- About your grammar, you have some mistakes
such as :when I pass the selection....
I think it: when I passed the selection....
etc
Hi...ais,,
i think your paragraph is good enough,,maybe there are some mistake,,but it's not problem..
and your story is focus on topic..
that's all my comments,,
thanks,,:)
Well,
That's a good moment, coz I have an experience like that..
U wrotong is good, but u forget to check the grammatical,,
Some of ur sentences don't use past tense.
But don't worried, u can be better on bext writing..
by:120810493 G
aisya,
you missed the simple past sentence.
some of your sentences are not in past form.
be careful next time, re correct them, okay?
thank you for your comment :)
by 120810185G
i think your paragraphs are good enough but same with others, you have some mistakes there. such as your grammar.
but it's ok, your writing easy to understand
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